Feedback

Halfway through our editing process we asked Emma for her feedback on what we had done so far. She said she liked the comedy side of it and how we have used editing techniques such as the two sets of shoes swiping across the screen in opposite directions to make it more unique and childlike. Although we had messed around with a few other ways to do this, such as trying to make the image of a basketball move as though its bouncing in time with the real life image which we realised was harder than it seemed so we didn't include this, Emma thought we should include more to create this theme and identity throughout the opening. Also we asked Emma to see if our opening seemed to stop and start a bit. Although she didn't seem to think so she gave us the advise of using our credits to break up the footage slightly.
After this feedback we are trying to create more of our editing technique and are trying to use our credits to break up the footage to try and improve our opening so far.